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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by Kit Carson, Feb 28, 2008.



    Kit Carson JPiC Contributor

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    Evolve
    The echoes sound
    Through the ages of man
    New age dawns as the world is one
    Slowly the forming of
    Global mankind
    Revolves
    ~
    Mike Carson
    2-28-2008


    Posted By Kit Carson | Feb 28, 2008
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    Kit, I love this poem...it reminds me of standing way, way up on the edge of a cliff, alone and in absolute silence, watching the sun come up on the morning...as little by little the world comes alive. It's a very deeply thought out piece, reaching back through the ages of our beginnings.

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    Kit Carson JPiC Contributor

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    Perfect image for this poem! Imagine all of mankind through the ages standing on that edge, alone...and what is the fundamental change today? We can join hands and link together and watch the sunrise on a new age together in a way that no other generation ever could. Thanks for seeing that and providing the extra image.


    Posted By Kit Carson | Feb 28, 2008
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    Speaks truth and well spoken.
    Excellent Rictameter Kit, much enjoyed!


    Posted By Moonchild | Mar 1, 2008
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    I really like the message of that!


    Posted By solo | Mar 1, 2008
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    Kit Carson JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you Moonchild and solo for your kind words.


    Posted By Kit Carson | Mar 9, 2008
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