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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    On this earth
    we call a sphere,
    Within the northern
    hemisphere,
    multitudes of
    colors bright
    perform like prisms
    in the night.

    Rainbow bands
    of painted streams
    ever changing
    so it seems.
    In the darkest
    space and ballast
    oh, Aurora Borealis.

    Beauty waits
    in anxious zeal
    for evening's fall,
    and all is still.
    Then earthly wonders,
    splendor bright,
    create a dawning
    into the night.

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    this poem was glorious eye catching

    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Thank You Erik:
    As usual your comments are greatly appreciated. :)

    Although I have never been up north in the state of Alaska, where the Northern lights perform their brilliantly colored light show, I've seen them on a special television documentary. To see them in person would be a wonderous treat though I'm sure.

    Is there has been anyone here who has actually seen the Northern lights? I would sure like to know how you felt about your wonderful experience(s).

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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Sally,

    I am enchanted by your poems of nature and wonders of nature. The Northern Lights are a divine celestial spectacle to see. I have only seen a glimpse here in PA, and it was if someone put up shimmering magenta colored electric curtains in the sky. The event lasted about three minutes. That was a mystifying life-long memory. I have a friend who teaches in Alaska and she see them often. There are not enough beautiful words to describe your poem. I loved it tremendously! This one is for you!

    Kimberly :)

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    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Sally,

    Vivid
    watching with you
    dawn to dusk escapade
    waxing then waning through day
    with you!

    See you inspired the fastest cinquain I've ever written!

    My Fav:

    Thanks for giving me a glimpse of your sky!

    Jerry

    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Kim: :)

    Thanks so very much for your warmest comments. After I read them I saw that WONDERFUL, BEAUTIFUL pic of the northern lights. Cool beans!!!!! It really makes the poem come to life!! Thanks so much hon for adding the coolest pic ever! What a joyous treat.


    Jer:

    I am glad I could inspire you. :) I LOVED you Cinquain!! Lovely beyond compare! Thanks!

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    papasan22 PenDragon

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    Wow, I really enjoyed this piece>
    Great rhyme & Theme~~!
    Peace@Love,
    PD


    Posted By papasan22 | Jun 23, 2007
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