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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by Bear, May 17, 2008.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Dawning mist
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    The mist of the reddish gold sunrise
    Is a lingering trail of white wet smoke
    As the rose-gold blaze tender, sheer
    Meets the old oak tree at dawns early light
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    Its ancient spirits whispers in the mist
    Every crinkle, scar, crease and lifeline
    Was etched by wind, rain and snow
    Throughout the epoch of significant time
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    Withdrawn from the concerns of men
    The ancient oak reaches to heaven, setting itself apart
    Its lifeline mocks my own evanescent span of life
    Oh! how its beauty awakens my heart and soul


    Posted By Bear | May 17, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Very vivid visuals and images Tom.
    This is really beautiful!
    Magnificant write...I love it and
    enjoyed immensely!:sun:


    Posted By Moonchild | May 23, 2008
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much my sweet Moonchild for your magnificent comments and for reading and enjoying this and all my poems
    hugskisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | May 23, 2008
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