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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Pad of paper
    Pen of ink,
    Eyes to wonder
    Mind to think.

    Words of spendor
    Subjects hard,
    Words to ponder
    From this bard.

    Taken from us
    To this hill,
    Lies a poet
    Ever still.

    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    I like the flow and rhyme. This is a great tribute to the dead poets - just wonder if

    "Lies a poet" is intentional.
    I think people are laid to rest, or the poet lays on the hill.
    Could be wrong though, these verbs always confuse me.


    Posted By JolieH | Aug 4, 2007
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