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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by sage, Dec 9, 2006.



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    Touching my face pretending
    it is yours, remembering how we
    walked together in the rain,
    now a sky in mourning.

    The wear your hands gave as you
    outlined my heart reveals a prairie
    of water forbidding you to no longer
    drink me.

    I drove you away as you let me,
    so far, where hell thirsts on the blood
    of the moon.

    sage ©


    Posted By sage | Dec 9, 2006
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    powerful, great writing it was good to read i'm sure not to eevryones liking but its perfect for my tastes

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    strong write, great ending stanza, nice work indeed:thumbsup:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 10, 2006
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    sage New Member

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    thank you so much echoes...have a great Sunday!:huggles:

    sage


    Posted By sage | Dec 10, 2006
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