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    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    I will not rest well into this Good-nite.
    With the world at my head despite my hindsight
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    My only give from you was my fortitude.
    Your good wishes I thought,had me fooled.
    So then, take me into your dawn,there I would be dammed.
    The people there crowded and cramed.
    Look that all may see!
    What they call peace, would be none for me.
    The quite calm brings a cool chill to the air.
    Still the people,to me they stared.
    Bring on then this Good-nite,that I might sleep unheard!
    When my only give to you were.........my words.

    GOOD-NITE THEN......so be it,Good-Night!

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    Spider:

    This energy in your poem is very stong. I really enjoyed this one very much. Good imagery as well.

    GREAT piece of art!
    Thanks for sharing

    Blessings
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Hey Lil' Brother,

    This was amazing how you had enough time to finally get out of that web, and write an awesome piece!! LOL LOved it! Love ya!!

    Kimberly :)

    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    Thank You Sally for reading and your taking to the commit on this poem:phonecall: ! I am truely happy you enjoyed it! This was sort of an old world style poem and it was fun to write!
    Thanks again Sally!!:D

    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    Thanks Big Sister.... I had this one in the corner of my web for a minute now!! It won an "Outstanding Achievement for 2006" I'm glad you enjoyed also!!:sign_thanks:
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Wow ...... I am awed ......you did this really well Curtis. Thank you for an awesome read.

    ~Mysty~


    Posted By Mysty | Jul 9, 2007
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    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    I Thank You also for reading and your comments on this poem Mysty! It brings me joy to know you enjoyed this work!:YAYmail:

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