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    Posted By Jeez | Apr 7, 2007
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    Phew!
    This one grabbed me with the title,
    then drew me in
    deeper!
    Jeez, if get a cold from rolling in the snow,
    it will be all your fault!!!! LOL!
    :goodpost:
    - Tree.


    Posted By Altree94 | Apr 7, 2007
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    My Dearest Jeez,

    Whew!!!!!!!!!! This was so sensual, yet sooooo soft and delicate. Like fine spun silk, it captivated my senses. That opening stanza was phenomenal, and the rest :heat:!!!! However, I know that this is what I require from my Jeez fix! LOL Yes, that title alone made my mind play tricks on me, or maybe my mind was in the gutter already. LOLOLOL! Absolutely drawn in like a moth to a flame with this one!!! :faint:

    {{{~~**KIM**~~}}};)2 P.S. You are NOT allowed to post without providing warnings! LOLOL Just teasing folks! :wub: :yay2: :spaz:

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    Posted By Jeez | Apr 8, 2007
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    Posted By Jeez | Apr 8, 2007
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    BATH towel!
    LOL!


    Posted By Altree94 | Apr 8, 2007
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    Hmmmmmm...a smiley with a bath towel...now that's kinda erotic....lololol.:roflmao:

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    I believe this forum is too erotic for me...
    This poem certainly is, and some of the replies ooze with eroticism.
    My poet friend Robert Peterson from San Francisco once titled one of his books "Wondering Where You Are".

    Wondering where you are.


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    Posted By Jeez | Apr 9, 2007
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    Posted By Jeez | Apr 9, 2007
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    Jeez,

    "Wondering where you are" is not a review. It is just a comment which means your poem is very rich and very successful in exciting the imagination of the reader, and thank you again for a wonderful piece.

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    Posted By Jeez | Apr 9, 2007
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    Jeez,

    I sometimes talk with riddles. I will avoid that in the future.
    Train of thought was this:
    Wondering Where You Are is thinking of you and that is good and there are things to look forward to=therefore positive and exciting. You would not wonder where one is if you did not care enough.

    Many thanks again.

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    Posted By Jeez | Apr 12, 2007
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