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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Bear, May 17, 2007.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Delicious Dreams

    As her sweet delicate kisses rain over me
    Their taste is so delicious and sinfully sweet
    I tremble in anticipation of her tender lips
    Which awakens my bodies every quivering sensation
    This she-devil teasing arouses the man in me
    Sweltering perspiration and fiery lust
    Her sensual games flirt with my reality
    As her sweet delicate kisses rain over me
    mmmm, only if dreams were real


    Posted By Bear | May 17, 2007
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Bear :giftrose:,

    OK, where is that damn towel at? :heat: sheesh!!!! I better go to bed early tonight, to have a dream like this! Thanks Bear! ----->Her sensual games flirt with my realityJust Brilliant!

    {{{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}}}:whip:

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    thank you so much my sweet Painted for your magnificent comment
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | May 17, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    YES...I have to agree...very hot!! lol!

    Amazing...PD you picked out exactly the same line I did!!

    Her sensual games flirt with my reality

    This line really stands out because there is so much promise in it...in the way of daydreams...not to mention the power it exudes...power of the mind...power of anticipation...power of possibilities.

    GREAT write!! :air_kiss:

    Nomad

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    Thank you so very much Nomad for you wonderful comment
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | May 19, 2007
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