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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Tanax, Oct 7, 2007.



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    Demonic Angel

    It striked me yesterday,
    how easy you could make me fall.
    Still, you make me so happy,
    you're my world, my all.

    And because of that,
    you really break my heart,
    when you said that thing yesterday.
    I don't want us to be apart!

    I'd cut my wrist, and die,
    if I could you just one time in my arms hold.
    Because I love you more than anything,
    you are the one who had my heart unfold..


    The girl I talk about is like an angel, but a demon when she does something stupid, because it affects me so much.


    Posted By Tanax | Oct 7, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    Yeah....it's very hard....when the one person you care for the most does something mean....perhaps it's not so much stupidity than it is being careless.

    Poems....are always an outlet. And you'd better not cut yourself :p

    *huggles*
    It's nice to see a guy who's willing to write poems :]

    well, just know you're better than the crap you're getting.....

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    Yea, I know :/

    Why is it nice to see a guy writing poems? :p
    Isn't there alot of guys on this forum? :O

    Thanks.. :wub:


    Posted By Tanax | Nov 16, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    haha.
    there are a lot of guys....but not so many younger guys :]
    So I like your head start! xD

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    hahaha, I see :p Thanks :)
    You're quite young you too ;)


    Posted By Tanax | Nov 16, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    oh yeah :]
    That's why I'm excited to see someone else young :]

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