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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by PoetryInMotion, Oct 11, 2007.



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    “Desire”

    My hearts desire
    Desire of ones beauty
    Missing you
    Wishing you were here
    ~
    The stillness of night
    Brings you closer to my
    Soul
    ~
    Your hearts
    Sentimental value
    Is the desire of wanting your
    Soul
    ~
    This night
    Unfolds
    With the beauty
    Of your soul
    ~
    The winds
    Whisper
    Your name in my ear
    ~
    I see your smile
    Embracing the wind
    I hear your soft voice
    Whisper through the wind
    ~
    The skies are dark
    No moon in sight
    The essence of your smile
    Shines bright
    ~
    Your beauty
    Landscaped
    With gracefulness
    ~
    I’ve got a feeling
    Deep inside
    ~
    Feels like
    I’m falling through the cracks of life
    Blind faith
    Leads me
    To the love of your soul
    ~
    Waiting for someone to love
    The night shines
    That of black Onex
    ~
    Life’s doors
    Close in on me
    Stepping out into
    The midsummer’s breeze
    ~
    Falling through the
    Mist of summer
    Winds blow through the canyons
    Chasing the September moons
    The dryness of September
    Unfolds upon
    The October
    Autumn winds
    ~
    The earth opens up
    Swallowing
    The emotions I feel for
    You
    ~
    Your love
    Bleeds out on
    Me

    © Arthur Henn

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    Hey now PIM,

    This is a smooth, embracing read start to finish - well put together.... You set the foundation in the first stanza and built a fine house on top of it........
    Mucho enjoyed......A+


    Posted By lasher | Oct 11, 2007
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