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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Poetry Garden, Aug 28, 2007.



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    Blanketed by darkness and despair
    Does anyone stop to say "I care"?
    Left to bear this burden alone
    The seeds of sadness are all I've sewn
    Nothing new in my life
    Nothing pretty, nothing bright
    And when I lay me down to sleep
    Black loneliness comes in to creep
    In the waking hours I weep
    Nightmares were my only company
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    I hear you all to loud and clear Danette... I am there in the darkness weeping too.

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Aug 28, 2007
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Everytime you write a poem, you have something new, and what a prize they are.
    You know all the JPIC family cares. It's sad so many people out there are lost and alone without a friend or a poem. I wish they could all find such beauty in language and such richness in friendship.


    Posted By JolieH | Aug 29, 2007
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    Yes you express despair so well in this
    and I can relate much.
    I really like this one it speaks to the soul.
    Very well done Danette :hug:


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 29, 2007
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    PoetryInMotion PoetryInMotion

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    My dear Danette

    You are one of my dearest friends
    We have known each other for awhile

    Never "Despair"

    My heart is always open to you!

    Your are the running streams
    that run through it

    Nice Poem

    You are (Always loved)

    Art

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    Thank you all for taking the time to read my poetry, I'm sorry it took so long for me to get back to you.

    Mysty thank you for hanging in there with me.

    Moonchild speaking to the soul is what I love to do, so this is a much appreciated compliment.

    JolieH so nice to hear those kind words...

    Art what would I do without you?

    Thanks again for those wonderful comments...

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    PG.........well written with sorrow's description. I enjoyed the write.


    Posted By Sartor | Aug 31, 2007
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    Thank you for reading my prose and taking time to comment...I love the challenge of capturing feelings in words...Thanks again

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