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    bloodletting_of_the_sky New Member

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    i comtemplate deep...
    how much of this is my fault?
    what have i done to continue...
    with this miserable feeling...
    i search my soul
    i search my mind...
    i look for answers in past time...
    i cant seem to seperate it all...
    so many things to ponder
    so many spells i'm under..
    i've lost control... so long ago
    all i know is
    i dont want to end up like everyone else
    i've got to find a stand...


    but i know that what i've been subject to
    has seeped into to me
    all the images of past memories
    everything said to me
    all the directions of where i have to go
    all my trust put into unworthy leaders...
    they should stripped of thier authority
    because thier demands have destroyed my sense of reality
    i dont know where to rest my head
    to open my heart againe
    so many people out there just waiting for a chance to fuck with someones head
    i feel my soul grow bitter... how can people have this one goal in mind?
    why do we spend all our time... trying to mislead other's life?
    i am a product of misfortune

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    Sealiah Poetic Dancer

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    Very moody, very dark. Also very passionate, if a bit despairing. I love it! Most of my works end up a bit cynical, and you throw us right into rage. Absolutely lovely. It's hard to find a poet who can adequately write about such dark emotions without making it... well.. cheesy.


    Posted By Sealiah | Nov 1, 2007
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    bloodletting_of_the_sky New Member

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    there where alot of motives behind these words... i dont really know the true source of inspiration for it... but i know that i could have exerted alot more effort into displaying my thoughts on such a topic of "control".. this was really prematurely done... but i think you might have glimpsed something about my will behind this.. and that's how you gleamed the true intent... you are every perceptive seliah!

    thanks for visiting my realm... mwahahaha!
    lol... now THAT was chessy...

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    Aumakua Misunderstood

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    You speak my language boy! Just not as dark as I speak it ^.~

    Fucking kick ass job xO (as usual)

    Really, really, REALLY enjoyed reading this. It seems like i can relate to all your poems o_O


    Posted By Aumakua | Nov 6, 2007
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