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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Mysty, Dec 13, 2007.



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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Disatisfaction

    what began as heat ....
    burned clean thru
    fast like flame
    burns incense

    and the scent lingered
    like raw onions
    on the breath
    no mint can fix

    satisfaction had by one
    when the other
    wished it had never
    begun, like nightmares
    are never welcomed.

    and just like the song
    "Don't Want No
    Small Dick Man"
    I will remain firm next time
    and just use a toy.


    ©2007 Mysty Johnson


    Posted By Mysty | Dec 13, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Whew! Can't comment on that one yet...WAY too early for my brain to get in gear! Haha! It is SO Mysty!

    Nomad
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    :wow: MYSTY - this poem is right on time - I had the most UGH nite last nite and this poem just emphasizes how horrible it was... In hindsite though - there is a part of me that simply wants to laugh: My life is a joke at times...

    Anyway - I won't dare ask what inspired this poem of yours :p --- But I can stand firm in my stance that it's easy to relate to lol - It's as if hindsight is saying "Better luck next time" in some sort of sardonic way, but totally and completely without any bitterness (( if that makes sense ))

    Nice write = Thanx for sharing it!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Dec 14, 2007
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Dear Ms Jacquii..... I hope your luck shifts and things get better for you hon.. I worry about you .... especially after reading your comments in shoutbox tonight. Anyways this poem is about a friend of mine in a game I play. She keeps going out witht this guy.... and then he dumps her to cyber with somebody new...always ends up going back to her though. Some of the stuff she has told me about him..... Sick shit he likes to do .... and he is a jehova witness of all things. But the most laughable was ... she told me she keeps a toy handy because he is very small in the manly section of his physique. Poor lady she is.
    This poem was written for her.


    Ms Nomad........ lol thank you .......yes I guess this is classic me ... picking up on vibes I hear.

    Thanks for posting Ladies.


    Luv Ya's

    Mysty

    ps. pay day is friday dec 21st.... my 26th anniversary. I am posting your books then to Ms Jacquii, PD and Ms Nomad. My 3 favorite ladies in all the world : )


    Posted By Mysty | Dec 15, 2007
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    Dear Mysty,

    Only you could turn that situation into a poetic masterpiece. The poem is amazing in your wordsmithing. I am sorry to hear about your friend and hope she gets out of the game, and finds her self worth. However, having you as a friend will help her through. Love ya!

    PD :girllove:

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    Fun poem and enjoyable, and I guess that when in trouble one uses whatever tool comes to hand.

    Hope your lady friend has better luck in the future.

    Thanks for sharing.

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