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    Don’t Mind If I Do

    My heart is not a revolving door
    through which you may come and go as you please.
    I am not a buffet
    where you can take your fill of the things you like,
    and leave the rest to grow cold,
    developing a leather skin.
    If you are so ashamed
    of what is hanging on your sleeve,
    why don't you flick me off
    and be done with me?
    I am not a wad of gum
    that you chew on and spit out
    when the flavour is gone.
    I am the woman you chose
    to walk through life with;
    beside me, not in front of me.
    I will NOT walk two steps behind
    and offer my hand to your foul-mouthed friends.
    Oh, and if you insist
    Thank you.
    I do believe I WILL Fuck Off.


    Karen Godson(AmazonPoet)


    Posted By AmazonPoet | Aug 29, 2006
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    It had to feel good to write that...You Go Girl!
    Love the last three lines.
    :bravo:


    Posted By Terry | Sep 8, 2006
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    Very nice! I agree with Terry; that must have been a fun to write! I really like
    "I am the woman you chose
    to walk through life with;
    beside me, not in front of me."


    Posted By Holly | Sep 8, 2006
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Amazon Poet!

    THIS WAS FUN TO READ AS WELL AS IT MUST OF BEEN TO COMPOSE!!! LET'S SAY IT TOGETHER...I WILL FUCK OFF!!!! LOL!!!!!

    LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT!!!!!!

    Painted Diary aka Kimberly
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    "Don't Mind If I Do" BRAVO! - Totally relating to this piece - Seems like I said just the same exact words the other day, possibly even today in dream LOL

    Always love reading pieces that define self-reliance and self-respect - this piece certainly does that KAREN -

    Thanx for sharing!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Oct 2, 2006
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    bravo 10 thumbs up!!! love it girl i love the image "developing a leather skin" :sign_yeahright: bravo


    Posted By santui | Oct 21, 2006
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    Boy....was this an unchained moment? It is expressive...lol...to say the least. I love it! Great work, muse.


    Posted By Benny | Oct 22, 2006
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    AmazonPoet

    Don't mind if I do. Sometime's it can take strength and courage I think to let go of people and other things that are just not working anymore.This speaks to being able to stand up and say treat me right or "don't mind if I" walk. I enjoyed reading you. You have great talent.


    Posted By michael | Nov 7, 2006
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