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    lanaia74 New Member

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    I can't believe you chartered a boat to celebrate my birthday
    We set sail today from Florida headed toward Bermuda's way
    This will give us plenty of time to get some sun and play
    Little did we know later on we will wish we had stayed away.

    I'd say we were about half way to our destination, when a mysterious fog bank appears
    All the instruments on the boat are going nuts
    We stop the engine hoping to avoid going into the fog
    We have no idea what's going on, and ti get through this will take a lot of guts.

    Stopping the engine makes the boat slow a bit
    The fog seems to be glowing in a way, by something strange it seems to be lit.
    Oh my gosh! From this strange thing, we must get away
    The illumination seems to be glowing, I have never seen anything like this strange fog.

    We try and read our compass, but no use the thing is going hay wire
    We would like to know the direction we are going, but there seems to be no way
    I do wish this would stop, as I am very tired and would really like to retire
    But from this crazy situation, it seems no one can stray.

    It seems that we are going to enter the fog bank
    I really wish I knew where we were
    We are coming closer to the illuminating fog bank
    Seems like we are going to go straight in, from this strange thing there is no way to deter.


    Posted By lanaia74 | Nov 8, 2006
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    Pretty cool! I love anything to do with the Bermuda Triangle. You caught the mystery about the triangle and made it interesting as well.
    I caught this little glitch: going on, and ti (to) get through
    Otherwise I was thoroughly entertained. It kept my attention from start to finish.
    Great job,
    Gail


    Posted By butchiesmom | Nov 8, 2006
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