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    Sealiah Poetic Dancer

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    I am you, you are me
    Why'd ya keep on running
    Won't you come, come to me?
    And at last we'll be there.

    Little heart of mine,
    Woncha see, woncha find
    There's so much more to hide
    Doncha cry Don't sigh!
    For I am the one that you
    Never saw, coming out of the dark
    Won't you come to my arms?

    I am you, you are me
    Why'd ya keep on running
    Won't you come, come to me?
    And at last we'll be there

    Now is the time
    When I look in your eyes,
    Feel the beat of time
    As it beats out our lives.
    For I am the one that you
    Never saw, coming out of the dark
    Won't you come to my arms?

    I am you You are Me
    Why'd ya keep on runnin
    Won't you come, come to me?
    And at last we'll be there
    I am you
    Why'd ya run
    Won't you come
    You are me, come home
    And at last we'll be here


    Posted By Sealiah | Jan 29, 2007
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    lovely poem sealiah,
    I enjoyed the I am you you are me which was most of the poem
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    Dear Sealiah,

    This was a beautiful scribe, with so much emotion pouring like fine wine. I also felt my body swaying a bit..perhaps this could be the beginning of lyrics, because I can feel music vibrating from the words. Lovely......simply lovely! Also...nice to see you back with a fantabulous piece!!!! :bravo: Much Luv.

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    v3sista U Know Me

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    I liked the repetition of these two. I could definately feel a beat from this write. I enjoyed the read. Nice job! :bravo:

    V3


    Posted By v3sista | Jan 30, 2007
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    Posted By Sealiah | Jan 31, 2007
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