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    jakeminick McGonagall's Ghost

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    In the mortuary of sensical makeup
    The palms are fingered trying to find some kind of placement
    A brine is spilling over the masses to dry up
    A sense of cohesion that the rain never fills up
    It's a parchment torn into various pieces
    Now sit on an island and catch the diseases
    We, we, we
    Catch along and complete
    Feel identity from reaction to sadists
    Now
    Yell, yell, yell
    Try to drown out the nonsense
    Forget all about intellectual prowess
    We, we, we
    March around and show protest
    Show that emotions have affected the progress
    A circus designed not for the wealth of the people
    But for the hunger inside seeing no one as equal
    Separation from monarchy into a feast
    Manifest destiny
    The weak are the beasts
    The weak are the beasts
    They react without thought
    To enact such a claim
    Is inviting onslaught
    To take a step back and invite the incompetence
    Is to undress the goblins of their whorishness lawlessness


    Posted By jakeminick | Nov 29, 2018
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    michael JPiC Contributor

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    Hey Jakeminick... I thought that this Drunken Political Poem was very intense...some of your ideas here I struggled to grasp...I like the lines: A circus designed not for the wealth of the people...But for the hunger inside seeing no one has equal... good job


    Posted By michael | Dec 7, 2018
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    jakeminick McGonagall's Ghost

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    thx man. it was more about reactionary politics and the dangers of going directly against something. instead of long form discussion it seems that people just group together to feel a belonging and never really discuss what the fuck is going on. coulda been a better poem tho


    Posted By jakeminick | Dec 7, 2018
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    michael JPiC Contributor

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    Okay... I get that. I hear where your coming from. How people can be so reactionary without understanding what they are reacting to or why they may be having a reaction to certain issues. And yeah belonging is big. Everyone wants to feel like they belong or desires to feel a sense of belonging. "Brene Brown"
    And my poems always could have been better I guess.


    Posted By michael | Dec 8, 2018
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