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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    So, i decided to actually make a Haiku Collection :]
    It has a double meaning....I hope you find it :]


    Echoes of Life

    Emerging slowly,
    masquerading in the light
    that shines though the leaves.

    Blossom releases
    tumbles, careens down the cliff
    Into the abyss.

    Swift, raging river
    carves its way though the Canyon
    Starts with one small stream.

    Wind howls though the night
    causing trees to swiftly bend
    If only still unseen.

    Dying sunlight of
    explosions of rich colors
    In the twilight sky.

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    I say you stuck to the norm of haiku writing,
    it was still impresive to see what you chose and it did go togther very well,
    showed up every haiku I'd ever done at least to me

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Anna,

    I see beginning and endings with this haiku about life. And I'm sure it is true to form, however this is one of the forms I'm not to good at. My Fav;

    I'm pretty sure this is what I said last night.

    :sorry: it didn't go through last night

    Jerry


    Posted By Jer4clarity | Jul 3, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    Thanks erik!
    Haha.....I'm sure our haikus will have a close fight for msJ to choose :]
    hehe...i tried to stay right in the haiku style, since I want it in the site :D

    Thanks jer :]
    *huggles*
    My fav haiku i the blossom one...But i'm glad you like my wind one :]
    Thanks!

    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    stunning work, love the title:bravo:

    your talent shines:smile:


    Posted By Echoes | Jul 4, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    Thanks Echoes :]
    *huggles*

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    oh I couldn't resist saying your title is superb very sellable title

    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    Thanks!
    It just came to me...
    :]
    hehe.
    the best titles are the ones that you don't have to think hard before it comes to you :]]
    thanks!

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    such an amazing awesome penning Mango magnificent expression of life from beginning to end. I am in awe of your imagation
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Jul 5, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    thanks....
    It really means a lot for your reading :]
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    Dear Ms Mango,

    This was absoluely outstanding! The title alone also is quite an attention getter, and drew me in, even before reading the collection. How beautiful, and each Haiku is as powerful alone as it is in this devine collection. A true classic. Thank you for sharing this with us. :bravothanx:

    Painted :)

    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    Thank you so much PD :]
    *huggles*
    My title *bows* at your feet :]
    Thank you for your encouraging words.
    I am very flattered.
    :notworthy:
    thank you so much :]

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