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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by mangodroplet, Apr 24, 2008.



    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    ecstasy
    fury
    pearl-white skin
    bodies merging
    movement
    swift passion



    heat.

    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Yup that's ecstasy and so much more.
    You described it perfectly with so few words.
    Wonderful!


    Posted By Moonchild | Apr 24, 2008
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    ummmmm....can i get some of that?

    zaac


    Posted By zaac | Apr 26, 2008
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    lol! I've missed you zaac :]

    teehee. I've bet you've had some of that before :p
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Oh My! :blush: Yes indeed - MS MANGO has done a bit of growing up :blush2:
    Wow - this is like...........SIZZLE - with a capital "S"

    Oooooo! I like the fast pace of this lyric then the brief Aaaaaaah! Then BAM! heat.
    So simple - so exquisite the rhythmic flow - such a thrill to read this type of poem.
    So sensual. Yes! I like it! Thanx for the share ;)

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Apr 27, 2008
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    hehe. Thanksies :] :wub:

    I'm glad you guys understand...

    Tha-Emissary Black Knight!

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    This was a quickie! and You captured the heat of the moment. Ectasy the drug has nothing on this legally good piece!
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    Yikes! and all I have is a turtle...lol...this was fantastic Ms Mango....has all the elements that make me just say :wow: Love it.

    PD :)
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Ha! I hear ya Pimp ;)

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    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Apr 30, 2008
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    Wow Anna! I read your poem, looked at your age, and wondered how a 16 year old could know enough about sex and passion to describe it so well! Holy cow! I would be having a very serious and long talk with my daughter had she written something as well as this!

    You have a talent which, I believe, will only soar higher as you write more!

    hugs,
    Gail
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    LOL - Well GAIL - I lost my virginity at 12 really...
    I've been running through the bushes and jungles hunting ever since :crazy: LOL
    Wow! At 16 - back in the waaaaay day when the English were 1st settling the country - 16 was a prime age for marriage and startin the big family to help till the fields and such :p

    Jacquii.

    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    oi oi oi!



    No rumors going around here!!!


    I am a virgin, in every single way possible :glare:

    I haven't had my first kiss yet.
    I haven't ever tasted alcohol before.
    I haven't ever done drugs before.
    And I won't have sex till marriage. xD

    Now, ask me where what I wrote came from...well...I dunno. lol. I've never watched anything much either...

    I guess it's what I imagine it to be....?
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Wow! I thought the words came from a new experience MS MANGO.
    The description is just so flawless that it seems inexplicable to think it came from anything other than experience :blush2:
    Interesting...
    But yeah - I suppose any good man can evoke such an imaginative response. I know mines can :blush:

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | May 2, 2008
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    butchiesmom JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Wow! What an imagination! Really, it's like you've experienced what most of all know about!

    Wow, MsJacquii! Seems you're a sexual prodigy! Running through the bushes and jungles? Hmmm? You have been busy!!!! lol

    hugs,
    Gail

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    Hello!

    This poem is a great description of ectasy with so little words to describe it with... which is definitely quite impressive and I think that you describe the essence of the subject wonderfully. I love the last line/word that you have "heat" to conclude the poem and that you finish with this. It made me think because that is the end result of passion and bodies moving together... heat. I love it when a poem makes me think after I read it and your poem definitely had me thinking and enjoying it after the last word.

    I think that you did a great job and I'm glad I came across this poem of yours. This was definitely an enjoyable read!


    Posted By SarahNSH | May 2, 2008
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    ROFL - I think it was some sort of experiment in UGH :LOL:

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | May 2, 2008
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    lol, thank you for your insights, MsJ and Ms Gail :]
    teehee.


    Thanks so much sarah! That was such a great compliment :]

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