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    Tears of Roses New Member

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    Eight Tears

    one tear for me
    one tear for you
    one tear for our love
    you said it was sent from God above

    one tear for what was
    one tear for what might have been
    one tear for undying love
    you said our love would last an eternity

    one tear for what never will be
    one last tear as I turn to leave
    with my broken heart in tow
    feeling like my end has come today
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    by Tears of Roses
    2006



    for those who would love to see the video to this here is the link I couldn't figure out how to add it here
    Fliptrack: Another Fliptrack Slide Show

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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Tears....this is a very poignant piece of broken promises and dreams...when hope is lost it seems as if there is nothing left...and then a little miracle creeps back into our lives...in the form of new hopes and new dreams....wonderful piece!

    Thanks!
    Nomad

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    hi tears of roses ... nice little poem not to mention the presentation! written from the heart i'd say so i hope that by now the tears have turned to smiles ...

    luv ya!


    Posted By Jims Inn | Sep 19, 2007
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    A poem that couldn't be more beautifully presented :) Nice piece, and i loved the picture. Thank you for sharing :)


    Posted By ¤Me¤ | Sep 19, 2007
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