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    Emotional Hope
    By L. E. Evenston

    Everyone just wants
    More
    Out of me without
    Thinking that
    I might want a life
    Of my own to control and
    Negotiate
    All by my
    Lovely self while

    Having
    Optimistic and
    Powerful
    Emotions




    Whee! Fun Acrostic time! ^.^
    If this is in the wrong place, tell me and I'll move it. Kay? kay.

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    yeah

    know you had to have a blast composing this here artist. as i enjoyed sharing. tight-
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    Dear CW,

    This was so awesome and so real, and I had so much fun reading it!!!!!! I know you enjoyed writing it! You go girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    {{{~~**Dr. Rob**~~}}};)2

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    Thanks you two! You rock all!

    The original didn't have the 'hope' in the end, and just ended with "Lovely self", but wanted to add in the hope 'cause I liked it ;)

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