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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Enchanting Truth
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    The enchantment of her gentle kiss,
    The seductive rapture of her bliss,
    Her eyes flood with a verse of truth,
    While her inner spirit most aloof.
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    My Love for her, a tortuous maze,
    My moment's gaze is but a phase.
    My gaze stops scarce of thee,
    As I absorb her mystery


    Posted By Bear | Jul 25, 2007
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Clever word weaving and the flow
    and rhyme is flawless. This is really lovely!
    I enjoyed muchly, thanks!


    Posted By Moonchild | Jul 25, 2007
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Bear this was exceptional in its brevity and movement of rhyme. Beautiful in sequence as well. That last line is superb! Loved it!

    Kim :)

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    Thank you so much Moonchild for your wonderful comment
    hugs kisses
    bear
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    Thank you so much Painted for your beautiful comment
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Jul 25, 2007
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