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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by Bear, Jun 19, 2007.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Evening Song

    As the haloed alabaster moon illuminates the Earth
    An evening song drifts through the countryside
    Natures aria sails on a warm summer breeze
    Listening to the sounds with excited anticipation
    Of nature’s majestic beauty.
    ~
    At sunrise the skies turn to golden fire.
    As the world treasures the last moments of sleep
    While the sun slowly rises in the eastern heavens
    And a sweet dew covers the wild flowers
    ~
    Gold and maroon echoes through the topaz sky
    Virtually translucent in its sheer beauty.
    It’s mystifying power stimulates life
    With all it’s stratospheric miracles
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    Extremely precious is the magnificent grace of the evening
    Let this elegant bond between nature and life
    Fill this world with peace and love
    Evermore


    Posted By Bear | Jun 19, 2007
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    Kit Carson JPiC Contributor

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    I like this one a lot. Out at sea and more recently working third shift at work, you get more in tune with those feelings.

    Very good Bear!


    Posted By Kit Carson | Jun 19, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    thanks alot Mike so happy you enjoy my works
    handshakes
    Bear


    Posted By Bear | Jun 19, 2007
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    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Wonderful

    Bear,

    Your description is so vivid I see the sky in my minds-eye. I've read it more than once to capture your imagery. Awesome write!

    My Fav:

    Jerry:rocking:

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much Jerry for your fantastic comment
    handshakes
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    Posted By Bear | Jun 20, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Bear, this is a spectacular poem...and brings to mind all the beautiful sunsets I am going to be seeing in a couple weeks when I go to Belize :yay: Thanks for posting...so peaceful and enriching to the soul!

    Nomad

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    thank you so much my sweet Nomad I hope that you have a great time at home and enjoy the beautiful beaches and sunsets and sunrises
    hugs kisses
    Bear


    Posted By Bear | Jun 21, 2007
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    Dear Pooh Bear:
    I can describe your poem in just one word..
    BREATHTAKING!!!!!!!!!!!


    A masterpiece in every sence of the word! I read it several times. Rated it excellent and then read it again. SUPERB write here bear. I absolutely LOVED every word of it!

    Blessings

    KayaOtah happy as ever

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    Nice poem, it captures me into it...
    *smiles*


    Posted By KayaOtah | Jun 23, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much Sally I am happy that you love my poems and stories and I love you writings also. thank you so much for the excellent rating.
    hugs kisses
    Bear
    ~

    thank you so much KayaOtah for your wonderful comment I am happy that you felt like you were there
    handshakes
    Bear


    Posted By Bear | Jun 23, 2007
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