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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Expand your Worlds

    Here come the melancholy rains;
    the sky that blooms
    in serious shades of gray,
    clouds towering high
    then sinking real low
    to become mist
    when the rains stop.

    I wonder if the world
    feels like I do;
    wading through
    a sense of expectancy
    as if worlds should merge
    in the stillness after the rain
    bringing a rebirth without
    the pain, the sorrow,
    it is a new beginning.

    Melancholy sighs
    as the sun burns off the mist
    and once again reality;
    evident pains and sorrows
    whispers of dreams behind
    closed eyes; the world awaits
    the lover, the fairy,
    the kindly queen.

    Come again rain
    and drown these sorrows,
    merge the worlds and unleash
    the power of fantasy within.
    Become the person
    in your sleeping head
    and expand your worlds


    ©2008 Mysty Johnson


    Posted By Mysty | May 28, 2008
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    An interestingly somber tone to this poem MYSTY - the forecast says rain ((re. Here come the melancholy rains)) - But looking deeper into your words - it looks like a possible sunshiny day. You always impress me with your nature writes. This poem for instance offers a certain insight into perfecting ones world, the whole while, paying tribute to the rain. I think this is what I like most about this write: The tip-of-the-hat towards nature and the grand simile of rain not spoiling the parade LOL --- There's encouragement in your words that really epitomizes the title Expand Your Worlds. There's hope and gentleness and kind encouragement!

    I liked this stanza the most for its all-inclusive aspect. I do think you are being a bit "mystical" with your poetics in this stanza though - I'm sensing a double-entendre or sorts LOL - I won't expound on that though - but I like this stanza and the entire write really.

    Nice write. Thanx for the sharing ;)

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | May 28, 2008
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thank you so very much MsJacquii :)


    Posted By Mysty | Dec 4, 2010
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