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    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Scout Eyes
    The first poem is a Cinquain
    The second is a Clarity Pyramid.


    Scout Eyes
    Take it all in
    Searching, searching, searching,
    And only other scout eyes see
    She’s there!


    SCOUT
    Stand watch
    Curious

    Exploring the world,
    Her eyes investigate
    by glance for eyes that look back.

    “the first to see what others can’t”

    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    What a uniqueness!1
    Combining a Cinquain and Clarity together was GREAT! I really loved it Jer:

    I'll be looking forward in reading Pt. 2

    Spendid job!

    Blessings

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    both parts come together nicely, I like the 2nd part better though,

    makes me think they found someone lost or missing
    which is really soemthing new for apoem

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Sally and Erik,

    thank you so much for stopping in and sharing your precious time to make these wonderful comments.

    Jerry

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