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    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    EYES OF SORROW


    eyes of sorrow
    stare through broken glass window
    nothing to ease hunger pangs

    mother walks the streets
    father never known, child waits
    for rescue from this hell



    Posted By Echoes | Nov 13, 2006
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    Dear Lisa,

    Powerful imagery. One could actually envision those eyes. Some may claim those eyes as well. You have painted a spiritual of sorts that has such an everlasting feeling. Well done poet...well done. Thank you for sharing!!

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    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    thanks again Kim, I always appreciate your kind thoughts about my work:give_heart2:


    Posted By Echoes | Nov 14, 2006
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    Howzit..This is very good..simple and powerful..If there was a thumbs up emoticon..I'd be using it now..


    Posted By Zeblon | Nov 14, 2006
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    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    Hey Zeb :wink2:

    thanks so much, your comments means much to me:bravo:


    Posted By Echoes | Nov 14, 2006
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    true to form, don't see these much, you did a fantastic job :bravo:


    Posted By Harry | Nov 21, 2006
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    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    Hey Harry :wavey:

    :word_thankyou: glad you liked it :yay:


    Posted By Echoes | Nov 23, 2006
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