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    A lanturne was given this name because it is shaped
    like a Japanese lantern when it is center aligned.
    It has 5 lines with a syllable count of 1, 2, 3, 4, 1,
    and can be rhyming or not.


    Friendship

    Old
    friendships
    are worth much
    more than gold to
    me.

    or

    Friend
    of mine,
    please, don't cry,
    we will meet once
    more.

    or

    In
    a far
    away place
    I will wait for
    you.




    Posted By Altree94 | Jan 22, 2007
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    What a treat to come
    and read such a nice
    piece of work.

    This has a beautiful
    feel to it, you warmed
    me up.

    Tree.... it lit my way.

    Thanks for the read.

    :welldone:


    Posted By Jeez | Jan 22, 2007
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    Dear Tree,

    :wow: As I have said, the poems you adorn us with are like gettin' candy at the store. These were brilliant, and I oh so love the Japanese forms. They are beautiful, and you do beautiful work my friend. I am learning from you, and you will see one day all what you have taught me. Like Ms Jeez has stated, you have lit my way as well. Not only are they beautifully scribed, but beautiful in form, and beautiful to gaze upon. I just envisioned this scribe on rice paper in ink, with dainty white, pink, and lavender flowers painted in ink and a wash, to compliment the write, with a hummingbird tasting the glory. Perhaps even rolled, adorned with a fancy Japanese ribbon, and placed in a beautiful bottle. That is what is intended in Japanese scribe and paintings. Thank you for sharing this Ms Tree, stunning, and my new word....Scrumpshalicious!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!!!:bravo:

    {{~~**PD**~~}}

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    BOTH of you ladies have just lit up MY night!

    Jeez - TY so much!!!!!! We all need warming up - these cold
    Canadian nights are not much fun, eh?

    PD - :blush: Your comments are SCRUMPSHALICIOUS!
    I just hope they are not fattening! LOL! TY, girlfriend!

    :huggles: :friends:


    Posted By Altree94 | Jan 22, 2007
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    Tree that was absolutely beautiful! Of course, Painted's delisciously descriptive "wrap" made it all the more delectable!! Wow! Painted! I feel I'm in exalted company between you two :girllove:

    Tree you inspired me to write a Lanturne, and it had to be about you, since you have introduced me to a whole new art form within the bounds of poetry.

    Tree
    Tree
    the bold
    beautiful
    and caring scribe
    Ah!
    Just
    once to
    be all that
    she is to me
    Yes!
    Who
    can hope
    to compare
    to this icon?
    None!


    Altree94 VIP Member

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    Oh Therese!
    You may think me silly but I have to tell you that when I read this, I actually had tears, I was so moved by your words! It is just sooooo beautiful!
    You also have the form down PERFECTLY! I cannot believe that you have never written in this form before! Truly Awesome!!

    :thanx2:

    :friends:


    Posted By Altree94 | Jan 23, 2007
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    Thank you so much Ms Nomad and here is one for you also Ms Tree, inspired by Ms Nomad, and....my first "Lanturne" ever.

    Tree
    Our Friend
    Heart of Gold
    Posey Queen and
    Loved
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    This next one is for Queen Therese....

    Rare
    Gem and
    Treasure she is
    Nomad Rhymer
    Vim
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    OHHHHH!! So cool!! Thanks, Kim...that was sweet!

    Nomad

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    Soft
    sweet breath
    cast upon me
    as love's blanket
    warm.


    Posted By Benny | Jan 23, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Ohh Benny! I can snuggle in it right now! Deliciously comforting.

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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
    PD and Benny!
    You are all gonna have me bawling here AGAIN!!!!!
    TY for such wonderful replies!


    Posted By Altree94 | Jan 24, 2007
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