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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    God's Little Soldiers

    Bright beams of armor
    protecting my honesty
    God's little soldiers
    starlit gardens be my apprenticeship
    his brilliance be my teacher

    This is for my Mom as she always calls the stars, God's Little Soldiers, and believes they protect us.

    PD :)

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    Wow Kim ... this is beautiful ...... and yes I can see you are gonna be one of those stars ....looking down and teaching and protecting everyone. Because you really are a star already. I am honored to know you and to be able to read your beautiful work. I love this one.. bet your Mom does too :) it is going in my favorites.

    Love

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 16, 2008
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    simply magnificent and wonderful Painted
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Feb 16, 2008
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    Truly Beautiful, Sis!
    I absolutely LOVE this.
    In fact, I'm gonna print it out and make a plaque out of it - just so I can read it over and over because your end line is pure genius!
    Keep up the great work!
    - Tree.


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    Like I just said, higher powers doesn't always mean dieties! I believe my grandmother is up there watching over and protecting me, so your mother's belief is right up there with mine.

    Love this tribute to your mom, Kim!

    lubya!
    Gail
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    Awww thank you guys so much for taking time reading and commenting. I am overwhelmed and so happy. I will be back to thank each and every one of you. Love you guys!

    Kimberly :)

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    You're our star kim and Gods little soldier too. I just love this one.


    Posted By JolieH | Feb 16, 2008
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    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    I like the way you have used your mom's words to create such a beautiful write!
    Thank You for sharing your memories Big Sister!

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    WOW Kim!

    How beautiful this poem is. The imagery is flawless and the structure is perfect!

    I enjoyed the brilliance of your words and how they flow like the smooth waters of a mountain stream.

    Thanks for sharing! your talents are superb!!

    Blessings
    Sally
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    Dear Mysty, Tree, Bear, Jolie, Gail, Curtis, and Sally,

    Thank you all so much for taking precious time to read and to comment. It warms my heart to not have written anything for some time, to write a little something that was received well. My Mother, Ms Jacquii, my JPiC family, and my love for the craft are my catalysts for never succumbing to writer's block. This is such a phenomenal community. Thank you all soooo much again. Love you all.

    Kimberly :wub: :hug:
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    Oh, sweet dearest Ms. Painted Diary, Ms. Kim!!
    Your poetical virtues show in every word of your lovely poem. The title indeed, caught my attention. Titles are so important to me, since they can catch the readers attention at one single touch. "God´s Little Soldiers." The stars in the sky are what your dear mother call God´s little soldiers, and they are watching on us with their big bright eyes. I especially like the first line: ..."Bright beams of armor..." I usually call the stars, glimmers or shining spies at night. Stars are so very beautiful, just like yourself. Your name is a real trade mark, with a solid guarantee. Ms. Kim, you are as good as gold!!
    God bless you in all the ways, in all you do, Ms. Kimberly!!
    Kind Regards,
    Starry.:yes::yes::girltender:


    Posted By stardust | Feb 26, 2008
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    Thank you so much Ms Stardust for taking precious time to read and comment. Shinning spies they are. God Bless Ms Stardust. I am in awe by your comment. Take Care.

    Kim :wub:

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    Kim this was lovely, and such as stardust said, you took, care to every word which is essential in poems 5 lines or less, and your mom has much to be proud of,
    even aside of your poetry, and everyone here can tell your soaring to new poetic levels and heights, as I wish us all to do but you already had a mountain of talent to build on
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    Dear Erik,

    Thank you so much for taking precious time to read and comment. I am in awe of your review and coming from such a successful and super talented poet as you. My Mom did indeed love this lil' poem. I hope to reach even more poetic and also in my story writing. Being here has been the catalyst for sure. You made me all misty. Thanks Erik.

    Kim :)

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    This is a beautiful write but I'm focusing on the imagination of this fine piece. The mind that is full of imagination can dream big things and place some wisdom within and you have been truly gifted from God.
    Keep writing and painting as your purpose unfolds. Nourish what God has given you seek His perfection open your soul to be a vessel awiting to be filled upon each completed assignment. You are one of the blessed one. Sincerly Godschild


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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Nice write! I love the entire concept of stars = God's little soldiers. Shining bright, armed with light, a warmth of protection.

    I like this very much! Thanks for the share Kim! And yes - I know - took 3 years to comment - but better late than never right? :p

    Jacquii.
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    Thank you so much Ron and welcome back!!! Yes...thank you for this commentary as it really speaks to me, and my apologies for my tardiness in replying. It truly is amazing to read because I am indeed on a journey as we read, and have many assignments to complete, and am blessed to be chosen as a vessel for sure. Blessings.

    Kimberley:rainbow:

    ---------- Post added at 12:05 AM ---------- Previous post was at 12:02 AM ----------

    LOLOL...Ms Jacquii, thank you so much for commenting and reading. Yes, it took three years but divine timing is always the perfect time! I too love the stars, and look up all the time. Of course, I teach about stars, constellations, etc, and I am still in awe of God's Little Soldiers!

    Painted :rainbow:
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    We converse about these magnificent Orbs of Divinity! Girl - kinda giggling "divine timing is always the perfect time!" love love love that!

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