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    I awaken with the awareness that I have a body.
    Mind kicks in and begins its control dance.
    Starts to try to plan my day, again.
    Where are you, Spirit asks?
    Here
    What time is it?
    Now
    The waves of the collective mind are filled with fear.
    Fear of the unknown, mostly.
    Spirit watches, understands with compassionate view.
    What is known, for sure, mind asks?
    Spirit replies, this moment is all you've got.
    Are you okay right Now?
    Mind struggles to answer.
    Well, yes but...
    What about, what's to come?
    Has it come?
    Well, no but...
    What about, what has been?
    Is it here?
    Well, no but...
    Body breathes a sigh of relief .
    I Am
    Good Morning World




    WRITTEN BY MARK ROSKE
    COPYRIGHT 2007


    Posted By papasan22 | Jun 30, 2007
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    Aste Intellectual Teen

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    Hehe. That's so cool! I love the last two lines. :3 It really makes the whole thing stand out.
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    Posted By Aste | Jul 13, 2007
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    :goodpost: Sometimes it takes me a while to seperate dream reality from waking . On those days, my dreams sometimes come back during the day, calling on my memorie or curiosity.

    This poem makes me think a little of Kafka's "Metamorphisis."

    Nice poem!


    Posted By JolieH | Jul 14, 2007
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    papasan22 PenDragon

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    thanx

    Thank you for your wonderful comments~~
    Papasan22


    Posted By papasan22 | Jul 16, 2007
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