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    bloodletting_of_the_sky New Member

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    to many convictions, signs...
    still you fill your time with excuses not to change
    no one takes charge of your life
    as much as you say that every circumstance controls you
    the world is hands free of you
    but here you are preaching to a computer screen
    telling yourself the same you told me
    the image you saw a couple days ago in the mirror
    a dirty home that was given you
    have you no will to live right?
    convictions signs not enough time
    love for the familiar, love for the right not existent
    it's a fight to stay unaware.... still it's all there
    all staring at you.. a reminder in the most depressing way
    convictions signs not enough time
    you could take time... to make your life right
    until then I send my prayers to God
    that you will see His might

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Phillip,

    I like the way you refer to someone else and leave the reader the feeling it may be you.

    My fav:

    Jerry
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Yes, I have to agree with Jerry...I was wondering the same thing while I was reading it LOL!

    Very nice!!

    Nomad
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    Dear Phil,

    I like how you are clearly sending messages, while educating yourself of the same messages. Strong in content and delivery. Some places, made me pause as if I was looking in a mirror. I also like how you clearly depict that it is not easy.....it is a process, and although the solution is God (which also from this scribe was a process to find) , you are sending your prayers...because there is still work to do. Great work Phil, as this is most memorable.

    Painted

    bloodletting_of_the_sky New Member

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    therese, kim, and jerry... thank you all very much for reading and letting me know how my words affected you... you dont know how it feels to hear these things from people you dont really know all that well... it makes me so high on life.... one of the few gifts i'm so happy God gave me is the gift to effectivly communicate my life in a way everyone can relate to.... all of you have had a part in making me realize my talent and i'm sure indebted to you now....
    much love and light to all three of you...
    jerry, kim.. i am sorry i have not been around to say much lately... but i just want you to know how special your words have been to me.... it meens more then you'll ever know... maybe i'll find the words to describe how you both have inspired me.... and then i'll write them down like i always do.

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