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    RazorBladeConfessions Member

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    So this is it,
    I’m cutting all ties.
    Got tired of the manipulation,
    All the jealousy and lies.

    We had much laughter,
    Had much more fights.
    We moved way too fast,
    Just blinded by the pretty lights.

    Everything was amazing at first,
    There was passion, love and fire.
    Honestly thought you were perfect,
    You ended up turning out to be a liar.

    All our relationship was a phony,
    Thinking I was living a fairy tale.
    We became one person as a whole,
    Tried making you happy but miserably failed.

    I thought we’d be together forever,
    You knew it wouldn’t last.
    Amazed blindly when I first met you,
    Now you’re just another story of the past.

    I hate how everything ended,
    Knowing how happy we were.
    We just moved way too fast,
    My love for you was not too sure.

    You’ve been gone for 6 months,
    Been mourning you for long.
    Most of the time I don’t even miss you,
    I guess our love was not that strong.

    Today I am saying goodbye forever,
    I really hope I don’t ever see you again.
    Hope you have a really great life,
    Now that our love has reached an end.

    All i have is a final goodbye,
    Grateful for all your time.
    This is just God’s sign,
    you weren’t meant to be mine.

  2. Surrender

    Medora Member

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    Like the final words most: "God's sign / you weren't meant to be mine."


    Posted By Medora | Oct 28, 2013
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    RazorBladeConfessions Member

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    I don't want to sound cocky but there is something about rhyming that gets my adrenaline pumping... lol
    I love to thyme all the time. It's like a gift I have.
    There's times when I would be bored and just sit down with my journal.
    The the rhyming would just flows on the top of my head.

    I'm really glad you liked this one. This was one of the last poems I wrote.
    A poem of letting go of the person you once had loved. :/

    :ohno1: :geek: :goodpost:

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    This is really impressive. I think all really good poems come from very deep and dark places, and this one is no exception. It's beautiful and strong and sad.


    Posted By Jearry | Nov 24, 2013
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