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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by TrueBlue, Jul 16, 2006.



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    -"World War Three"
    Tales of World War III
    Constitutes the spectacle
    Signed with thier honor

    -"Two Face"
    Healing hands destroy
    This siamese beast is man
    Inseparably

    -"Intolerance"
    Everlasting man
    Strength to be inflexible
    A minimalist

    -"Torment"
    In parrallel worlds
    Spirit and soul entangled
    Like Adam before

    -"Science of Transcience"
    Elsewhere providence
    All horizons are alike
    In a foreign land

    -"Passing"
    Beautiful stanger
    Inspiring me with desire
    Cure me of this love

    -"Denying Eden "
    Dystopic stillness
    The garden in which we've sown
    Inverse reaction.


    Posted By TrueBlue | Jul 16, 2006
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    WOW! I am impressed by the language in these pieces. There's a lot of anger I think - But never any bitterness - Just composition of bittered truth that you tell. Very interesting writes:

    Tales of World War III
    Constitutes the spectacle
    Signed with thier honor


    AND

    In parrallel worlds
    Spirit and soul entangled
    Like Adam before


    I'm interested in knowing how & why you came to write such thought provoking haikus... ALSO the 1st is very well constructed - It makes me think of someone who's quite complacent to let the chips fall where they may. And in that stance is some kind of Omnipotence of some sort!

    Explanation please - But @ anyrate Thanx for sharing!
    Very nice -

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jul 17, 2006
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    TrueBlue New Member

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    I wrote these haikus quite a long time ago now. Some of them I was making them out of a study device for a history course. Maybe that explains it a little. But maybe "to let the chips fall where they may. And in that stance is some kind of Omnipotence of some sort!" is sort of my disposition anyway. I am a pacifist at nature, so I often feel like an observer. They weren't all for school.


    Posted By TrueBlue | Jul 17, 2006
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    Your words are very interesting. Short and to the point, and yet inspiring :)


    Posted By LW Barker | Jul 17, 2006
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