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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by Bear, Oct 10, 2007.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Hallows Eve

    On a cold windy Oct. day
    The skies are a cloudy gray
    An wicked eeriness now emanates
    Oozing through this blessed ground
    With the crimson sun and harvest moon
    And the horizon’s painted burnt-orange
    ~
    The sensitive hairs jump and tingle
    On the back of your neck
    As a menacing wickedness nears
    Chaos and disorder rules the wind
    As swirling leaves, do a vortex waltz
    The eyes of death and destruction within
    ~
    Creatures, goblins, witches and vampires galore
    Among them the scariest of all, Children
    Masquerade through the villages for just one night
    Commandeering a feast of sweet candied treats
    As sounds of screams and holler ring out the night
    Loud enough to wake the living dead.


    Posted By Bear | Oct 10, 2007
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    ahh but The true evil night is Gate night ... the night before.... Halloween is the night ALL Saints come out to banish the evil. ;) At least that is how I heard it. But this one is also ... well it leaves tingles and goosebumps. Kinda picturing Jason.... from Halloween lol....

    Wonderful, .....no..... Excellent Penning Bear.

    Love Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Oct 11, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Very nice and scary Bear! You must be feeling Holloweenish tonight!! lol!

    Nomad

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    Thank you so very much Mysty and your right gate night is the scariest Booooooooo mmmmmm I smell the delicious scent of woman think Ill have a bite tonight, licking the side of your neck lol
    hugs kisses
    tom

    Thank you so much Nomad yes feeling a little holloweenish tonight alot of the houses around here so devilishly made up for this halloween
    hugs kisses
    tom
    mmmmmmmm never tasted a belize woman's neck mmmmmmmmm sounds utterly delicious so perfectly brown


    Posted By Bear | Oct 11, 2007
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    Sorry.......wrong thread


    Posted By Sartor | Oct 14, 2007
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    Sorry.............Wrong thread


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