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Discussion in 'Miscellaneous' started by Eric, Apr 14, 2008.



    Eric New Member

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    The house
    lies
    abandoned

    Boards over
    the windows
    the yard choked with weeds

    But it is
    far
    from empty

    For inside it
    lives
    a presence

    Felt by all
    who
    pass near

    A voice
    calls

    Beckons

    Wails
    desperate
    to be heard

    A spirit
    smashes spectral fists
    against boarded windows

    My love my love
    a whisper moving through the stagnant air

    Where is my love.
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    Posted By Eric | Apr 14, 2008
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    Dear Eric,

    Now you are in my territory ;)! First I love the title, then the eerie build up, which gives the audience images so crisp and an ending that mixes the macabre with tenderness. I want this and please dedicate it to me....lol LOVE this Eric. Excellent rating and going into my favorites!

    Dr. Rob :)

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