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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    He Holds the World


    He has seen
    the world with
    many eyes,
    through
    countless tears
    and wondrous sighs

    Of all the visions
    that those eyes beheld,
    only one
    caused hope
    and hearts swelled
    with eternal fear

    a babe was born
    and in his eyes
    he holds the world
    in thrall.

    With wisdom in heart
    he defied the game,
    watched the world
    suffering through
    all the pains

    and in his heart
    he knew
    what he must,
    finally,
    do.


    ©2008 Mysty Johnson


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 8, 2008
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    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    I really feel this one, a very powerful write Mysty!
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thank You Curtis :)


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 9, 2008
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    "and in his heart
    he knew
    what he must,
    finally,
    do."

    I think this poem makes a strong impact....like the way you've structured it too:)


    Posted By solo | Feb 10, 2008
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Dear Solo.... thank you very much and :jpicwelcome1: I know you will find :jpicrocks:
    I hope you have fun here and any questions about anything you can ask me or PaintedDiary or NomadicRhymer or of course our lovely MsJacquii, our beautiful talented webmistress.

    Any of these lovely ladies would be delighted to help you. I am sure you will find everyone here is pretty friendly.

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 10, 2008
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    Lindamay JPiC Contributor

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    Beautifully written ...


    Posted By Lindamay | Feb 12, 2008
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thank You Lindamay : )

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 12, 2008
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    Dear Mysty,

    Of all the visions
    that those eyes beheld,
    only one
    caused hope
    and hearts swelled
    with eternal fear


    Ahhhh...a beautiful write my dear. Beautiful in content and execution. Put a smile on my face and the message everlasting indeed. An excellent rating...

    Kim :)
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    wow Thank You Kim :D

    Love Ya

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 13, 2008
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