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Discussion in 'Spoken Word & Freestyle' started by Benny, Oct 29, 2006.



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    Hers are dreams, fractured
    and broken but
    never forgotten,
    where in her heart
    pools a lake of tears,
    still and awaiting
    another drop
    of her longing
    unfulfilled.

    His are regrets, layered
    atop false pride
    he's chosen,
    whitewashed forever
    without redemption,
    cold and muted
    are pained
    apologies
    unspoken.

    Theirs is a life, fragile
    and needfully
    bound together,
    healing each wound
    as they so find them,
    revealing the need
    as time opens
    each image
    of their love.


    Posted By Benny | Oct 29, 2006
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    Hi Benny!
    I think this is the best definition of a perfect marriage that I have ever read! I really like your title. We all always bring past hurts to a new relationship but with time, and the understanding that can only come with time, those hurts are healed. Wish I had read this before I posted my rant called "I Married an Idiot"! LOL! Ah well, another storm weathered!


    Posted By Altree94 | Oct 30, 2006
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    Benny New Member

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    LOL...I have to admit...most of us men act like idiots at times...no doubt about that...and I hope by now I have outgrown most of that. Thanks for the reply to my post and glad you enjoyed the work.


    Posted By Benny | Oct 31, 2006
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