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    HEAR THE SOUTHERN RAIN. (POEM/SONG)

    Have you noticed the horses
    How freely they ride?
    Have you noticed I'm waiting
    For you by my side?

    I'll be watching the river,
    Gazing at a daybreak,
    Pondering of our memories
    Laid in fields far away.

    Hear the wind blowing
    And the Amazon rain,
    Birds singing in old country lanes,
    With smiles and laughter,
    You thought we'd fall,
    We'd fall in love again.

    Hear the music of nature,
    Hear the Amazon rain!!
    Hear torrential raindrops,
    Hear the Southern rain
    Falling like Amazon rain!!

    Hear the words of my song!!
    Hear the sound of your land,
    The place where you belong.
    Who notice I really care??
    Is anybody out there
    Listening to my message??...

    We live in a free land,
    We've got brave hearts.
    With showers of blessings abound,
    Our spirits are set free for you and me.

    Hear the voice of wise minded ones,
    Hear the voice of motherhood
    Telling her children not to roam in strange places,
    Because strangers can leave burning traces.
    Mother tells her children
    Neither lie nor turn against family ones.

    Mother prays to the Lord
    For the union in her family,
    Because evil waits out there
    To catch the weakest ones.

    Author: Stardust. (11-2010):heat:
    I dedicated my poem/song to the Americans who live in the Southern States.
    I got inspirations from them many times in my life. So now, this is my gift to them.
    God bless America!! God bless the Americans!!
    Oh!! By the way, it is very hot in my corner of the world...


    Posted By stardust | Jan 28, 2011
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Lovely love lovely sentiments. And being in Tennessee... Well - I like lazy country days ,lazy country days in the summer - shorts, no shoes, a restless wind blowing everso gently.

    Anyway - this piece makes me long for Spring and Summertime yes indeed.

    Thanks for the share Ms. Starry ;)

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jan 30, 2011
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    Hi Starry! I'm torn... started out by the lazy river and imagining those thickly humid southern afternoons... then I saw "amazon" rain... and my mind flipped to the heavy downpour of the subtropical climates... so now I'm curious... does the South get those kinds of rains too? That's what we get in Belize... the sky opens up all of a sudden and POURS HARD! then poof, it's gone again! lol!
    Love this piece though...

    Nomad :beach:
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    Hi Nomad,

    Thank you so much for stopping by, visiting me, reading my poem and expressing your wise evaluations!!
    Yes!! I guess, the Southern States get lots of rain...
    In fact, this is a poem/song, since I have added a lovely melody to its lyrics.
    I can sing my song too...
    God bless you, Nomad, and all those you love, dear!!
    All the Best,
    Starry.

    ---------- Post added at 08:35 PM ---------- Previous post was at 08:25 PM ----------

    THANK YOU SO MUCH, MS. JACQUII FOR TAKING YOUR PRECIOUS TIME TO READ MY POEM/SONG AND DEDICATE YOUR POETICAL INSPIRATION TO SAY KIND COMMENTS TO ME!!
    YES!! I LOVE TO SHARE MY POEMS, TALES, THOUGHTS AND SO ON WITH MY FRIENDS AND LOVED ONES. IT GIVES ME A THRILL TO REALIZE THAT I COULD TOUCH PEOPLE'S HEARTS WORLDWIDE WITH MY WORDS OUT. WOULD YOU LIKE TO HEAR MY SONG?? I RECORDED IT IN MP3 FORM.
    IF YOU SEND ME YOUR EMAIL IN A PM, I CAN SEND YOU MY SINGING TO YOUR EMAIL, IF YOU WANT.
    MY DREAM IS TO FORM A MUSICAL BAND ONE DAY IN THE FUTURE, IF THAT IS GOD'S WILL...
    GOD BLESS YOU, DEAR FRIEND MS. JACQUII!!
    (((((YOU ARE A SUPER FRIEND!!)))))
    ALL THE BEST,
    STARRY.:bass:


    Posted By stardust | Feb 7, 2011
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Starry I would love to hear your recording! :wub:
    I can even upload it to JPiC server and add it to your post if you like.
    My email address is webmistress@jpicforum.info ;)


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    HI DEAR FRIEND MS. JACQUII,
    I AM SO SORRY THAT I HAVEN'T SEEN YOUR REPLY BEFORE. (((I APOLOGIZE TO YOU!!)))
    I STILL HAVE COMPUTER TROUBLES. MY DESKTOP COMPUTER IS STILL IN THE REPAIR SHOP.
    THEY DID NOT BRING IT BACK. I AM STILL BORROWING PAUL'S SMALL LAPTOP FOR A SHORT
    WHILE TO READ MY EMAILS, TYPE MESSAGES AND MY POSTS. YOU SEE, I HAVE HARD TIMES
    READING IN SMALL SCREENS, FOR I HAVE A POOR EYE VISION. I HOPE YOU MAY UNDERSTAND.
    OF COURSE, I SHALL SEND YOU MY MP3 WITH THE RECORDING OF MY SONG:
    "HEAR THE SOUTHERN RAIN." YOU WILL HEAR JUST MY VOICE TRYING TO SING A LITTLE WITH
    NO INSTRUMENTS IN THE BACKGROUND.
    MY SONG WILL CERTAINLY GET ENHANCED WITH LOVELY INSTRUMENTS, OF COURSE.
    I IMAGINE A LOVELY FLUTE IN THE OPENING VERSES, THEN THE MUSIC BEGIN...
    I PRAY TO THE LORD TO FIND EXPERIENCED MUSICIANS TO ADD LOVELY MELODIES TO MY
    LYRICS, SO THAT WE MAY SPLIT OUR PROFITS IN 50-50 WHICH IS FAIR.
    I HAVE A DREAM IN MY HEART...I WOULD LOVE TO FORM A MUSICAL BAND IN THE US. SOUTH.
    I COULD ONLY BUY A HOUSE IN THE SOUTHERN STATE, IF I'LL BE ABLE TO AFFORD TO PAY
    FOR THE BILLS AND MAINTENENCE, PLUS ALL PROPERTY TAXES. IN OTHER WORDS, I SHOULD NEED A GOOD INCOME ON MONTHLY BASIS TO MAKE MY DREAM COME TRUE. MONEY IS THE KEY...
    WELL, I THINK I HAVE OPENED MY HEART OUT FOR YOU ALL, SO THAT YOU KNOW WHAT I TRULY WANT FOR MY LIFE. GOD HAS SET A PLAN FOR MY LIFE BEFORE I WAS BORN.
    I AM READY TO FULFILL GOD'S PLAN AT ANYTIME. I PRAY FOR MY DREAMS TO COME TRUE.
    IF YOU OR OTHER FRIENDS FROM THIS WONDERFUL FORUM WOULD LIKE TO CHAT WITH ME FOR A LITTLE WHILE, SOMETIMES I AM IN FACEBOOK IN THE EVENING BEFORE OR AFTER SUPPER IN MY TIME ZONE.
    GOD BLESS YOU, MS. JACQUII, AND ALL THOSE YOU LOVE!! YOU ARE A SUPER FRIEND.
    IF I TYPE IN CAPITAL LETTERS, IT IS BECAUSE I HAVE HARD TIMES IN READING SMALL PRINTS.
    ALL THE BEST IN YOUR WONDERFUL LIFE, MS. JACQUII.
    IN GOD'S GARDEN,
    STARRY.:trombone::trombone:
    [IFRAME][/IFRAME]


    Posted By stardust | Mar 5, 2011
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Thanks Ms. Starry and yes indeed - money is key = I wish I had more of it myself LOL


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    Hi Ms. Jacquii,
    Thank you for stopping by to read my poem again, sweetheart!!
    You know, I have made some important changes into my song.
    I wish to post the new version of my song: "Hear the Southern Rain."
    What should I do, write a new post, or just add the new version in a comment's area?...
    God bless you, sweet Ms.Jacquii!!
    All the Best,
    Starry.:flyaway:


    Posted By stardust | Mar 14, 2011
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Maybe post it again in the same section - but entitle it "Hear the Southern Rain - revised" ;)


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    Thank you, Ms. Jacquii for your kind reply!! I'll do that as soon as I can.
    God bless you, sweetheart!!
    All the Best,
    Starry.:kiss2:


    Posted By stardust | Mar 14, 2011
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