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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by ronn55, Mar 23, 2008.



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    There’s this moment in time
    Where I can see things so clearly
    That snapshot in my heart and mind
    Of a love I hold so dearly

    As time passes us by
    We’ll grow old in our years
    Yet my heart can’t deny
    The love that takes away my fears

    No matter the shape
    Nor the physical shortcoming
    I’ll not let that love escape
    Else deep regret will be forthcoming

    Nothing ever stays the same
    Physically and mentally we all change
    But it’s the heart where love stakes its claim
    That makes for a harmonious exchange

    Love is meant to last forever
    For that snapshot I keep deep within
    I can recall when and wherever
    To strengthen my love time and time again

    So don’t worry about what I’m thinking or feeling
    Your beauty is constantly being refined
    But what keeps you so devastatingly appealing
    Is that snapshot in my heart and mind


    Posted By ronn55 | Mar 23, 2008
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    great penning Ron fulled with emotions, also shows the fear we all have in a relationship as it shows the beauty of love
    handshakes
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Mar 25, 2008
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    This is such a sweet poem. It has lovely rhyme and rolls along so smoothly. The recipient of these feelings is certainly lucky.


    Posted By JolieH | Mar 25, 2008
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    ronn55 godschild

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    Thank you for your review, it is greatly appreciated
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    Oh yes and it's the recipient of these words which gave me the inspiration to write this. For just being her. No change required. Thank you for your review


    Posted By ronn55 | Mar 27, 2008
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