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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Bear, Nov 17, 2007.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Her Soul...
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    From the first time I mer her
    I embraced her total being
    Filling in the missing shards
    Attempting to mend her broken heart
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    I embrace her crystal blue eyes
    Gazing deep into her imprisoned soul
    I see her soft quivering lips
    Ever waiting for the delicate
    Eternal kiss of life
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    I envision her wondering mind
    Is there such a thing as love at first sight
    As I hold her securely in my arms
    Whispering, I want you to be with me
    Forever and always


    Posted By Bear | Nov 17, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    As usual Honey Bear :)

    A romantist of the heart. Always sensual and loving. And your wonderful poetry says it all.

    I indeed love reading your work, and always look forward in doing so. Don't ever change your heartfelt way of writing. It adheres to the thoughts of this reader and melts all the tensions from my mind.

    Thank you for sharing. :)

    Blessings

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much my sweet beautiful Sally I am so happy that my poems melts your tensions from your mind
    hugs kisses
    Bear


    Posted By Bear | Nov 19, 2007
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    Dear Bear:
    I am so happy to be able to reach your poetry. Your words indeed, melt the heart of the readers. I love your style!! It´s adorable!! I shall be looking forward to reading more about your work of art in Poetry, sweet Bear. I am glad to have read such Inspirational Poem of your heart. You sound in love, Bear...:snog:
    God bless you, Poet!!
    Cheers, Starry.:peace:


    Posted By stardust | Nov 19, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    thank you so much my sweet Stardust I wish I was in love I was thinking about a someone special to me whom I'd love to be with but it'll just be friends my choice
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | Nov 19, 2007
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