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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Sacred Rose, May 28, 2008.



    Sacred Rose New Member

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    hey everybody, this is my first post, so please comment

    Her Stare

    The color of her eyes
    more blue than the sea
    capture and envelop me

    I struggle not
    and gladly drown
    in the eyes
    that do surround

    When she looks into my eyes
    it takes my breath with much surprise

    Sinking down into her gaze
    my lungs fill up
    sight starts to haze

    My skin crawls
    as my body falls
    sinking down into her stare
    smiling, and without a care
    my heart sits still,
    lungs void of air
    smiling, sinking into her stare

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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Sounds like love to me... :)

    Nomad :beach:
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Sounds like truelove to me :yes:
    Nice write Sacred Rose. Thanks for the share.

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jun 18, 2011
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