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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    HIS COLORS ~ PUSHKIN SONNET

    The painter in a Monet world inspired,
    by moon-soaked flesh and curves that speak proclaimed,
    his Juliet in brush strokes so desired,
    dipped in colors, a passion so renamed

    where in his eyes a vision so beautiful
    beyond an art his heart paints dutiful.
    For his sore eyes was more than recompense,
    a heightening of senses circumstance

    and as he filled in every curve and shape,
    she sat there lithe like swan in graceful poise.
    His Juliet in color screamed like noise
    so vividly in paint to canvas rape.

    He touched her nudity with not one feel.
    His colors were a touch closer to real.

    © August 28, 2007 Karen Davies


    Posted By Moonchild | Jan 17, 2008
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    Terence Member

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    Hi Moonchild, I like to write sonnets and to read other peoples'. The Bard was truly brilliant - and we can all aspire to that, can't we?
    I picked up your subtle sexual undertones and think you did a great job with folding them in. Also, phrases like 'moon-soaked skin' speak to me but your couplet is stand-out. Very well done.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Jan 17, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thank you so much Terrance :)
    I enjoy writing Sonnets and reading other people's too.
    I have around 300 of them.


    Posted By Moonchild | Jan 18, 2008
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    reasonrhymer New Member

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    Karen,

    Nice, Nice and more nice.

    This did flow like a work of art.

    RR.

    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Hi RR it's so good to see a familiar face here(hug)
    Just want to say thanks for your kind words!


    Posted By Moonchild | Jan 19, 2008
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