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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Hestoria, Jan 23, 2007.



    Hestoria Hestoria

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    He loves me,
    He loves me,

    Plays over and over like a record in my head,
    Like the sight of him as his heart bled.

    He cared for me, it shinned within his brown eyes,
    To bright to see, it was all a lie.

    I felt it, his every embrace, together, can be so tight,
    While I was as dark and as sinister as the night.

    It had to be done, I couldn't stand it anymore
    His fate, I would put to an end, I swore.

    I called to him that night and he came with such glee,
    The dragger behind my back he could not see.

    He smiled at me, as bright as that night's shinning stars,
    My, that dagger sure went in far.

    He looked shocked for awhile and then came the pain,
    I watched as his tears and blood stained.

    And then the light in his eyes grew dim.
    I walked away when his heart died within.


    Posted By Hestoria | Jan 23, 2007
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    Yes, I have broken a heart before. Even though it had to be done, I felt dirty and broken inside....we can all understand this one...no doubt. Dang, it hurts to read this one...lol


    Posted By Benny | Jan 23, 2007
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