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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Bear, Feb 16, 2008.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Honey
    ~
    I heard her voice whispering
    In an amazing love song.
    I seen her love written
    In the brilliant azure sky.
    ~
    I felt her breath on the warm breeze
    Emanating from the ocean.
    I seen her on the wings of a dove
    Floating effortlessly by.
    ~
    With every sip of ruby red wine
    That intoxicates and soothes
    My being, my very essence
    I envision her in my thoughts
    ~
    These vignettes of her
    Holds me through the night
    Until the morning dawn
    Leaving the sweet taste of Honey


    Posted By Bear | Feb 16, 2008
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Honey Bear :)

    Ahhhh The sweet taste of honey.
    The whispers of love.
    Heartfelt feelings of romantic intimacy.

    I loved this! As always your words have enveloped my sences like warm blanket.

    Thanks for sharing
    Blessings
    Sally
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Hiya SugarBear,

    is so lovely to read your work hon.. pure intimate romance... love ..... you always leave me sighing and wishing. I enjoyed this work very much Bear.... the visuals I can see ..... your use of brilliant colors gives one the ability to picture this. Thank you hon for sharing a beautiful poem.

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 16, 2008
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Just like a Bear attracted to honey. This is sweet Bear just like you...
    Hugs


    Posted By JolieH | Feb 17, 2008
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much Jolie for the great comment and you are as sweet as honey yummmmmmmm
    hugs love kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Feb 17, 2008
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