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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by drofdar, Nov 10, 2006.



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    HOPE
    Hope is seen when the new bird sings
    Hope is there when the prisoner is bound
    Hope is shown in newly wed rings
    You can find hope all around
    Hope will always be with faith
    Hope will always come with love
    Hope can even simply be found
    From the good divine above
    Hope is usually in plain sight
    All you need to do is open your eyes
    Even in war there is found some hope
    That deep within death, freedom and liberty lies
    You ask me what hope you have left
    I'll tell you to look inside your mind
    And if that task seems far too great
    Just ask me and i'll help you find
    The answer you've been looking for
    As days turn to months and months to years
    And if you can't find hope within yourself
    I'll help you out by getting rid of your fears
    What fears have I? I can hear you say
    I answer deception, betrayal, dismay
    As you wander from day to day
    Lurking in lonely nothingness' sway
    So try to find your long lost hope
    And if you can't then let me try
    For hope will help you find peace in your life
    Believe me friends, and like a dragon you'll fly


    Posted By drofdar | Nov 10, 2006
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    Hey Ed,

    Love your first post! Hope is found within ourselves, that is for sure. These lines are especially poignant and stand out immensely. I love the message, and tone that this piece radiates. It is memorable. I see you have some great talent Ed. Thank you for sharing, and keep'm coming!

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    Thanks Painted aka kim lol
    I put my heart and soul into these poems
    I'm going to explain this one a lil bit tho...
    See...i wrote this along with "life's meaning" a few years back...when my friends were really depressed. They were thinking about ending their lives and i didn't want to see that happen...so i got really unhappy....and an inspiration for a poem came up...thus hope. I also wrote the other one and gave them to them and their outlook on life totally changed...I was sooo happy that i continued to write...and now i've written quite a bit...tho most of it was lost when i moved...anyways i hope y'all enjoy reading...THX again painted

    Ed


    Posted By drofdar | Nov 11, 2006
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