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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by KingAce, Aug 6, 2006.



    KingAce JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Happiness contained by your life
    Opposing the ideas of despair
    Playing with self-assurance
    Extracting the important things, that always seems to be positive,

    Holding on to your dreams and aspirations
    Offering to enhance other people's self-respect, so they can also have hope
    Preffering to take the hard road, armed with faith
    Entertaining your imagination with fantasized ambitions of becoming a somebody

    Healing the abrasions rooted by doubt
    Obtaining a sensation that impacts like a deep emotion
    Possessing the power of an idea that can intrigue any type of personality
    Exotic in appearence like beauty of a blooming flower

    In spite of things you may hear,
    Hope is the definition of hope...


    Posted By KingAce | Aug 6, 2006
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    Dear King,
    WOW!!!! Loving the acrostic structured format first of all!!!! The words you choose are always symetrical, always parallel, always building upon one another until the perfect fractal appears! Hope is something quite different to me now, after reading this. The creativity that you possess is masterful. As I have said before, I will be at your book signing!!!! The last two stanzas, if you will....

    Healing the abrasions rooted by doubt
    Obtaining a sensation that impacts like a deep emotion
    Possessing the power of an idea that can intrigue any type of personality
    Exotic in appearence like beauty of a blooming flower

    In spite of things you may hear,
    Hope is the definition of hope...


    are incredible. I have this thing for reading poems backwards also, and reverse is just as aesthetic as descending. King, what can I say...YOU DID IT AGAIN!!! Can I be one of the first people to get your book? LOL!!! LOVED IT KING!! I now know what HOPE really is. Much Luv'...

    Painted aka Kim
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Beautiful! Absolutely BEAUTIFUL - KING you've defined Hope in such a way that it willnot be denied. The definitions you've written are what I've tried to say about hope all along - You must've read my mind...

    Now with that said - Thanx for sharing your hope with the Community.
    Very beautiful piece of poetry KING! :yes:

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Aug 8, 2006
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    Very beautifully written! Obviously, a lot of thought went into this poem! I never thought of hope as being exotic but you are right, it is. Especially to those who have none. Are you going to submit this anywhere for publication? I really think you should!


    Posted By Altree94 | Aug 19, 2006
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    KingAce JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    I'm a tad late on this one but nonetheless I thank everybody for responding this honestly is one of the most inspirational poems I have ever written and took a sizeable amount of thought to get it the way I wanted...Thank You


    Posted By KingAce | Jan 18, 2007
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    King, this one was well worth the read! Indeed, crafted by the mind of an artist...great work, Muse!


    Posted By Benny | Jan 20, 2007
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    KingAce JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thank you very much Benny the feed is much appreciated


    Posted By KingAce | Jan 23, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    KingAce, I think this is seriously awesome in the expression and the depth and range of HOPE...no longer a small light that can increase in the hoping of it, but a many-tentacled entity that reaches into all aspects of life and light and emotion and spiritual strength.

    Thank you! A masterpiece in my book!!

    Nomad

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    King, your words do indeed cover hope's range...I cannot express properly how wonderfully inspiring this work is for me. Just beautifully written and soulfully wrought. Great!


    Posted By Benny | Jan 23, 2007
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    KingAce JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thank you very much for responding to my poem it was truly an inspiration within itself to write...


    Posted By KingAce | Feb 23, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    ACE!
    Sorry for the very very late comment....i think this was around when i wasn't-
    anyway, AMAZING!
    I love it!

    hope.......is amazing.
    how else to put it?
    You did it justice.

    :wow:

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    King you ACED this one!

    KingACE,

    This is a great Acrostic poem. Leave it to a rapper to have that kind of talent. My Son www.zombiekat.com is also a rapper. Anyway, your poem is jampacked with truth and wisdom.

    My fav:


    These lines tell what true hope can do!

    :dance: :jump: my poor attempt at hip hop!!!!

    Thanks,

    Jerry

    KingAce JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    The fact that people are still commenting on this when it was started a while ago makes me very happy, I'm always honored to have people interpret what I say as something good....Thank you once again


    Posted By KingAce | Jun 11, 2007
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