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    The night air brings a chill
    As I gaze at the sky
    Hopeless dreamer, hopeless romantic
    Always waiting...that is I

    The quiet night reaches in
    And stirs my soul, silence needed
    Sets my mood, desired peace
    Calmness has succeeded

    My mind free to wonder
    My heart free to feel
    Peace of mind I've found
    And it seems so surreal

    All the nights I've laid alone
    Staring into the dark
    I've wondered how to free myself
    On a new journey to embark

    Tonight, there is only good
    As my peace settles in
    Only looking forward
    Not thinking of where I've been

    A new outlook on life..
    As I take it day by day
    Finding myself again
    A real smile to display

    A beautiful night, star filled sky
    That waited right outside
    Called to me to come and feel again
    And the beauty it would provide

    I swear...what a night to behold
    And one I'll always recall
    Hopeless dreamer, hopeless romantic
    Yes...but aren't we all?


    Posted By Terry | Aug 28, 2006
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    nice poem very cool man Terry you just added allot to this site I enjoyed thsi peom emensely
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Hi TERRY - very nice write. I too frequently find myself the hopeless dreamer, hopeless romantic - but in that hopelessness is inspiration that one day the hopeless romantic will find me.

    Nice poem - I enjoyed this one!
    Thanx for sharing & welcome to JPiC

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Aug 28, 2006
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    Dear Terry,

    I really enjoyed this write very much. Ahhhh, the dreams. What would we without hopes and dreams? This literally took us into all phases of the dream process. I have a strange tendency to read poetry from bottom to top, backward, or from end to beginning to see if I get anything different. This piece was amazing either way. Great scribe, and I look forward to reading more of your work. Bravo Poet!!

    Kimberly aka Painted

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    I thank you all for the comments.


    Posted By Terry | Nov 18, 2006
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