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    I am Finished With You!


    When I say "you", I don't mean a person. I mean Love.
    And yes, you may recognize some pieces from songs.
    When I heard them, they just, fit me so good, so I had to include them.


    There's a limit of how much a heart can take,
    I gave you everything, I trusted you!
    My heart, you always break,
    why can't you for once, be true?

    Over and over, I fall for you.
    Over and over, I try not to.

    Why do I do this over and over?
    Everytime, my heart sinks lower and lower.
    I would give you everything I have,
    the good, the bad.

    What I really need to know,
    is if I've been cursed.
    Here I stand alone,
    and spreading out the worst.

    Over and over, I fall for you.
    Over and over, I try not to.

    Everytime I give you out,
    I never get you returned.
    I want to shout,
    but my spirit you've burned.

    Come and break me down, bury me, bury me!
    I am finished with you.
    Look in my eyes, you're killing me,
    All I wanted was you.

    Now I really know that,
    I have been cursed.
    Here I stand alone, above,
    with nowhere to go, noone to love.


    Songs:
    The kill
    Over and Over
    Spreading out the Worst


    Posted By Tanax | Nov 2, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    *huggles*
    i'm sorry you feel this way "/
    But....
    well...
    what i've learned...is that real love don't want back.
    I mean, it's nice to have someone back...
    but real love is to love someone and let them be happy.

    I dunno. just my thought about it...
    lol.
    i had a long rant about it in the "general chat" section with the sticky question--> What is love?

    But yeah.
    Don't give up on it.
    Love's really a beautiful thing.
    Your poem makes me really really sad. And I can see you're frustrated. But hang on. It'll get better.
    *huggles*

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    Yea, concur. Love is a beautiful thing... when it's returned.
    Love from only one side, doesn't quite cut it.

    Yea, thanks.. I hope it will =//


    Posted By Tanax | Nov 16, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    hmm. it depends....on what kinda love.....
    unrequited love is sad.
    but when you love someone.....
    you want what's best for them.
    even if it is sad "/

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    Yea, but sometimes you think that it's your turn to be loved.
    But nooooo, that won't ever happen.. -.-


    Posted By Tanax | Nov 16, 2007
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    Hey Guys,

    I think Mangodroplet has a point real unconditionally love is the kind that you give with out the expectation of receiving in return and real love is the kind you give that no matter what the recipient does that love for them will always be there. However, the truth is LOVE HURTS LIKE HELL, hey, we are only human and we do have feelings. When we give our heart and open up to someone, it is with the hopes of getting their love in return, unfortuanately it doesn't always work that way, but trust me I was fifteen and eighteen just yesterday and I was searching for that kind of love and I got my heart broken and broke hearts in the process, but just as I was about to give up, it found me.

    Point: Don't be afraid to love and if it doesn't work out a bunch of times, keep pressing forward, it only has to work out once.

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    Thanks for your reply.
    But I don't know. I just don't believe in love anymore.

    We'll see. The sad truth is that I'm interested in a girl, right now.. unfortunately.
    So we'll see how it goes. But I don't wanna get too attached to her. So for my sake, I will try to be only a friend to her, so that I don't expect too much, so I don't get heartbroken when she tells me that she only wanna be friends.


    Posted By Tanax | Nov 16, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    Let yourself be happy.....
    *huggles*
    have hope.
    perhaps if you let loose....she'll see you for who you are....
    Plus....love is not the only thing to make you happy....

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