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Discussion in 'Spoken Word & Freestyle' started by v3sista, Jan 29, 2007.



    v3sista U Know Me

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    What do you think of when you look at me?
    When I look in the mirror, I’ll tell you what I see.
    I AM…abrupt, assertive, bashful, baptized, charismatic,
    Christian, diabetic, devoted, educated, empowered, feminine,
    Flirty, god mother, genuine, head strong, heartache, imperfect,
    Important, jazz, just, kind, keen, lovable, lonely, maternal, migraines,
    Negro, near sighted, open minded, out spoken, poetic, passionate, queenship,
    Quick tempered, reserved, realistic, straight up, size sexy, tenacious, trustworthy,
    Uncensored, under paid, vivacious, valued, well rounded, wearisome, x-rated,
    Yielding, youngest, and finally zesty; but all these things, I could not be, if I didn’t
    first take time to love ME.


    Posted By v3sista | Jan 29, 2007
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved the wording, the tempo, the content, the style, the structure, the poem, the message, the revelation, the reflection, the I am here, and this is me, the rhythm, and the last line in this alphabetical & soulful breakdown is a gem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Every woman should read that Anthem!!!! You continue to amaze me, with the quickest, freshest, sharpest style, that is so unique, so you, and all original, and most of all.......all experiences that you have lived. You Go Girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    {{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}:hooray::wow::bravo:

    v3sista U Know Me

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    :hug: U make a person feel good. :blush2: Your comments are worth a million. This was an excercise to use words using every letter of the alphabet to describe yourself in poem form, it was fun. I'd love to see one from U and Ms J sometime. :elephant:

    V3


    Posted By v3sista | Jan 30, 2007
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    Sealiah Poetic Dancer

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    This was awesome! You lay things out on the table, so blunt and yet it comes out as if it is a flowery speech. "Rawr, I am me, like it or shove it!"

    Great rythmn, great tempo, awesome wording... I bow to your magnificence.:w00t:


    Posted By Sealiah | Jan 31, 2007
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    :scores: :wow: :thanx2:


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    Totally AWESOME!:bravo: :toot: :doh: :fishsmack:


    Posted By lanaia74 | Feb 15, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    I love the beat of this...awesome!! Makin no excuses and keepin it real!!
    I saw myself in much of it as well...kinship is a wonderful thing!
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    Sista...what a wonderful write! I would stand and give you an ovation, but you can't see me do that...hey, what the heck...I'm standing and clapping!


    Posted By Benny | Feb 15, 2007
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