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    I danced with an angel last night
    my God such a beautiful sight

    As we swayed to and fro'
    to the music we know
    in the darkness her halo shone bright

    A shimmering dress made of lace
    wrapped upon her in glorious grace
    so perfect the sight on an elegant night
    and so pretty, so pretty the face

    I prayed please don't let the song end
    for her magic's beginning to send
    a message so dear with a meaning so clear
    as we moved like two birds in the wind

    What her wholeness was trying to say
    in her precious and unselfish way
    was "dance with me Sir, and I'll promise to stir
    your libido in every which way"

    Needless to say what ensued
    all five senses completely renewed
    for as a song ends, an evening begins
    definitely now in the mood

    Hot Hot Hot with delight
    as we loved each other all night
    a new dance in skin which made my head spin
    in the darkness her halo shone bright


    Posted By Juzjon | May 21, 2007
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Hello JUZJON and Welcome to the JPiC Community - If you haven't already done so - please introduce yourself to the Community via the Member Introductions section ;)
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    Very nice poem - light and easy, the rhythm just flows and makes for a very nice read.
    I particularly liked the repetitive in the last line of this stanza - a sort of elegant wordplay stressing the beauty of the angel and how easy to fall quickly and succinctly into the dance!

    A very nice poem = Thanx for the sharing!
    And again - Welcome!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | May 24, 2007
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    Juzjon New Member

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    Why thank you Ms Jaqquii, thank you very much.


    Juz


    Posted By Juzjon | May 24, 2007
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