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    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    I feel you...
    I taste your choclate kisses.
    Smooth and creamy waves build deep within me-
    as I ride your curves with all I see.
    Taking tours with my hands... I feel you.
    All down your back and spine... I taste you.
    Never-the-less, I will save the best for last.
    All wraped-up in pink,careful not to move too fast.
    But as for you my sweet, again... let me taste you.
    Under the palm tree....
    Beside the rose...
    With doors closed...
    without our cloths.
    In the river, in the boat.
    Lost padles away we float.

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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    OMG .... Curtis let me tell you ..... I felt this... Absolutely Sensual and beautiful.... Breath quickening ... Thank you for a very very lovely read.

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 3, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Very sensual and yummy!
    "Tast" should be "Taste" in the 2nd line.
    Could really feel this one.
    A sweet little poem, well done! :)


    Posted By Moonchild | Feb 3, 2008
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    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    Thank You for reading and I am happy you enjoyed this write!
    I hope to read more of your work also!

    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    OOOPSS!! Thanks For the correction! I'll get right on it! But thanks for reading Moonchild and I'm glade you enjoyed!

    deep_poet86 Endless Rewind

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    Your poetry is growing on me, I have never read a dissapointing poem by you, they keep getting better! I loved this one. So imaginative, sensual so beauitful, thanks for the read, lovly poem :D


    Posted By deep_poet86 | Feb 5, 2008
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    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    I thank you kindly for your comments on this work deep_poet86! It's really good to know you like my poems! I enjoy your works as well and I look forward to reading more from you!

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